Whenever I had to write for a project or homework, I would wonder if it was okay. Usually I would think of going to mom and ask her, but I was scared that she would say a bad comment about it, and would make me retype everything. I couldn't trust my work on my mom's hands. One day, I was writing my english homework, and mom came in my room to see how I was doing with my homework; she saw the paper. My attempt of hiding my work was a failure, but all of the sudden, she started to day that is was a good story, and showed me some grammar and spelling mistakes. After I realized that moms can help you a lot with your work. Just trust them, and she will be a great help-fathers too-.
Good! I liked how you said how you thought about this thing. Also I liked how at the end you stated how you felt. Great!
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Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteMrs. Brown
Great job! I like the message your story told! A suggest you should change "bad comments" to derogotory comments, I tink it will make your story sound more proffesional!:))
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