Thursday, May 13, 2010

A Gaze in Rapture

"Ready, Caty, Mickey?" My brother and I nodded, my mom turned on the the engine of the car and we started to head to El Dorado for a party at a friends house.
After 20 minutes driving, we dot to this huge white house with garlands on both sides and a huge space to fit five monster trucks.
"Wow! Henry's house is so big." I looked up and realized it was about 3 floors. The door opened and Henry-my brother's friend- came out and showed us in: The whole house was clean, organized, and it was very big.
"By the way, Victoria is down stairs." I walked slowly and greeted everybody. Although I tried to stay calm, I knew the boy I liked was here.
"Keep it cool, don't go crazy." I took long deep breathes and walked my way down, but because I was so nervous, I shrieked and jumped.
"OK, Keep it cool, keep it cool." When I was at the door, I saw him. Everything went in slow motion. How he was swinging the ping pong racket and how he was missing every opportunity he had to make a smash. I gazed at him with rapture and got lost in the real world.
"Hey, Caty. Yo girl wake up!" I shook my head and woke up. Victoria was patting on my cheeks.
"You should stop looking at him." She goes to the small footbolito table. I walk next to her and I laugh.
"We'll see." the whole party was lavish. I had a great time there, and when I got home, I felt so happy.

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